This is our second rough cut and we have recieved feedback from out teacher.
1.To make the piece stronger there should be a soundtrack added.
2.Foley sound should also be added to the piece as it is used as a sound bridge.
3.There are certain pan shots which need to be deleted as they are shakey.
4.Need to re-do scene in flat as there is a change of outfit which does not make sense.
5.Shots zooming out should be deleted as it jumps.
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